Mary Jane

Mary Jane

A Poem by Succubi
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A "song" that I wrote just for the random hell of it

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Darling I'm sorry

But baby I gotta admit

I've found my pleasure

From somthing else

Somewhere else

 

And it gives me all the satisfaction that I need

As the lights of my life start to fade quickly

I've married again...to another woman

Her name is Mary Jane

 

And every night, before I fall myself to rest

I curdle my lips around her green open crevice

Tight as I want it, as I roll it

Yea...

 

I'm smoking the night away

I'm smoking my life away

For all the bullshit that its worth

She's never betrayed me

While all you do honey...is hurt

 

She's given me all the satisfaction that I need

As the lights of my life start to fade quickly

I've married again...to another woman

Her name is Mary Jane...

And you will never take her place

 

I've been in love with her

Since I was fifteen...

Fifteen years ago

When peace, love and drugs

Were all we needed

To get by in this life...

 

Her name is Mary Jane

I'm sorry baby

But no one can take her place

No one can take her place

She's my addiction

My sorrid affection

No one could ever take her place

 

 

 

© 2008 Succubi


Author's Note

Succubi
think of it as a Bob Marley song =]

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wow.... it sounds like your addicted!!! but as long as you don't take be stupid and take it too hard, we won't have to worry...jk.. but yeah, you really weren't afraid to let everything out and say exactly how you felt... you always say it from your heart and it's...inspiring!!!

~may

Posted 16 Years Ago


oh boy pot i like the use of words but the part of a plant replacing a person well.... its good to have an outlet but dont let it consume you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very descriptive of your emotions.

You know how to express your emotions very well.

:]

Posted 16 Years Ago


wow thats a really good one! i love the lines,

I'm smoking the night away

I'm smoking my life away

its amazing. good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


wow thats AWESOME!!!!!! i love it ^_^
such a good song :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


I've never heard of Mary Jane as name for any drug...am i right in thinking that's what the singer of this would be saying? Has he named it himself, or am I getting behind in drug lingo haha?
Tried to read it with reggae in background after reading your author's note.
Pretty good lyrics, nothing too corny or cliched, and a good rhythm.
Nice work.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on May 3, 2008

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Succubi
Succubi

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My name is Jennifer. I am fifteen years old and I am inspired to be a poet, novelist, songwriter. I play the electric guitar and hope to start a band one day with my music and lyrics. more..

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