Carrion Mistress

It is basically a poem that metamorphically talks about the fall of man through the "Carrion Mistress", who is technically the "w***e of babylon" (but there are no mentions of that in the poem)...

 

The nemesis divine

Sits on her throne

Mortal blood is her wine

In which she licks to the bone

 

 

Her eyes are cruel

Lecherous and jaded

Perfect for the fools

In which her lust has sedated

 

 

Her seed procreates

Wicked hearts and tainted minds

The Earth's scum and waste

Secluded in a disasterous bind

 

 

The firebound spell

Of mortals and bloodhounds

Leaves humanity with thousands of souls to sell

To a place that is never safe 'nor sound

 

 

Her sins are deadly

Counted in the sevens;

Brought forth to the nine

And exiled from the heavens

 

 

The Gods above and below

Gaze at her with a menacing glance

For this darkness on humanity she bestows

Will leave their creation forever cursed, under her trance

 

 

She draws the blood of man from this Earth

But it shall be returned

And boiled in Hell's fiery Hearth

Where the remains of her soul, shall burn

Reviews

[brita]

I like this piece, especially the first stanza:
The nemesis divine

Sits on her throne

Mortal blood is her wine

In which she licks to the bone



I can just imagine some beautiful woman sitting on a huge golden throne sipping blood from a goblet, representing the height of all evil and looking down on everybody else.
Great write. I really liked it.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Ooh, this is a cool poem and I love it. The writing is just amazing and it flows so well. Awesome write!!!

Heather

[satanic666]

ahhh food for my restless soul how it reminds me of older days I love it keep it up write more like this one it was awesome!

[Emily Rose]

Creepy! There were points were the grammar didn't quite fit, but hey, poetic license, right? I really liked your imagery in this; you got that creepiness of your Carrion Mistress across quite well! The demon (person... thing...) that you describe reminds me very much of Sin from Milton's Paradise Lost.

[chris' girlfriend]

what an awesome poem!!!!
very cool :) i like your style