Make your soul regret

its the chours of a song that i am writing.

Make your soul regret

every life it took away.

Every night they come back,

back from the grave.

Kill the diseased,

Haunt the deceased.

Scream you're guilty,

conscience wiped clean.

Author's Note

tell me what you honestly think.... its supposed to be a rap but its also screamo.

Reviews

[Pale Rose]

I like it, it does seem like a rap or song. My only advice is to expand on it, since it seems cut short, imho. If you can keep the same sort of rhyming and creepy lyrics in an expanded version, I can see this being a full song. Regardless, though, this is dark and delightful. I especially like the hint of zombies ;)

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Beautiful, beautiful my friend. Once again, you've written a marvelous peice.

[EternityWolf101]

Very poetic. I like the part about the dead coming back to life. It chilled me to the bone. Keep on writing, Demitri.