Blink

Contest entry for Ami N.'s " Shortest Story Ever " contest. Within a blink it is gone.

Blink

Roses of youth; ivy of age.




Summer D.
Also Known As: Aisha_U

Author's Note

I recently, a few minutes ago, found out that you could submit a second work to Ami N.'s contest. " Shortest Story Ever Contest." I'm that late.. I believe I saw a friend make a status message about that. It just never really clicked.. There was some confusion about that anyway.

Things are rather slow in WC..... Ah, well. Can't help that.
Anyway, can you guess why it's called Blink?
COME NOW; I made this so obvious!!!

This is one of my less mysterious pieces.
BASK IN IT'S AWESOMENESS.

All reviews welcomed!

YT,

Summer

Reviews

[The Scholar]

In short--since short seems to be the theme here-- . . .

Awesome.

[Archia]

This was really beautiful. I just keep reading this because it is so beautiful and holds a wonderful (to replacethe word beautiful) meaning.

[Summer'sBreeze]

I love this
it tells how our lives can fly by in the blink of an eye
:P hehe that rhymed
you are so going to win ;)

[Miss Evans]

Life passes us by in a blink. One moment you're diddly-daddlying and 'smelling the roses', the next you are sitting in your rocking chair looking back on life.

Very nicely written, I like it.


(Even though this is my competition, I am rating in 100, good is good whether it's gonna whip your poems behind or not.)

[Jasmine Thousand]

Yes.
I happen to be that mysterious person who said that.
._.

To me, the meaning is like the rose of the beauty when one is young,
but the mystery of an old person.

And the beauty is all gone in a *blink*

I loved it! YOU'RE GOING TO WIN FOR SURE!!! *sobs dramatically*

*100