Elysium

" Shortest Shorty Story Ever " contest entry. Created by Ami N. A six-word entry.

Elysium

Golden fields where my ancestors lay.

Summer D.
Also Known As: Aisha_U

Author's Note

This was definitely a challenge. I mean, six words? A really unique contest though. You have to give her props on that one. Hehe, we need a new category

" Really SHORT SHORT stories."

Elysium. It's a synonym to the word ' Heaven '. This is probably my FAVORITE synonym to heaven besides:

Kingdom Of Heaven
Paradise
Jannah (Arabic word for Paradise)

Yeah, I like any word BUT.
- incomplete thought-

Elysium is my favorite :)

Reviews

[AK]

Beautiful. I'm kind of obsessed with the word Elysium and it's mentioned in Percy Jackson just like Jasmine said. I really liked this piece because it shows how you can explain so much in so few words.
Request:PLEASE DON'T LEAVE WRITERS CAFE!!*puppy dog eyes*

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Short, sweet, beautiful!

[Archia]

Elysium is a beautiful word and you conveyed that in your story.

[Lina Grey]

They say a picture paints a thousand words. I say words paint a thousand pictures. This may be really short, but the concept is so deep and it produces a wonderful image. Nicely done. Thank you.

[Miss Evans]

It's really pretty! I like it.

But that's still 7 words, unless you're not counting the repetition of the title. In which case, you may want to remove it.

Still nicely penned nonetheless.

Bravo. *100*

[Summer'sBreeze]

wow very beautiful
and for me it just paints a vivid picture
a really great write

[The XYZ Writer]

The word Elysium just seems to be beautiful and like Ally said radiant. Those six words gave me a whole picture of a field like a cemetery with golden grass. Very nice. Great job! :)

[Jasmine Thousand]

Elysium was also used in Percy Jackson :)
I love it. It's beautiful :D

[A. L. Allen]

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I think the word Elysium just adds a kind of radiant beauty to any piece. :)

Very nice job!