The Chosen's Destiny season one teaser

This is the teaser for season one of my series called The Chosen's Destiny.

Barry is chosen by fate and zapped with a lightning-bolt, his destiny amounted with many trials ahead of him, a young cape crusader trained by a brutal darkness known as the Dark Knight searches for a way to save him, the Last Son of Krypton is missing, but one El still remains, but has only ever known the white walls around him which are his prison, and a young terror who quills his enemies, porcupining them with arrows -- but even still, this team is not complete.

Reviews

[Stars and Whales]

This is a very complex piece, but I love it! It really gives me something to think about, and that's what you want from readers, especially with a teaser like this! "...only known the white walls around him which is prison.." I like it! Great job, keep up the great work and be sure to critique the writing of others, such as myself! I would appreciate that! Thanks, Ray.

[Ray]

Thank you very much! You just wait, more is coming! And sure, I'll check out your work!