Welcome to Grover's Mill

Rewrite of a poem from "Country Folks"

 

 

Welcome to Grover's Mill

 

They landed right there,

Right there in the beanfield.

They chose us.

Imagine.

We greeted them with glee and laughter,

Country music,

Flowers,

And homemade Bundt cake.

We, in our childlike innocence,

Could know nothing of their evil intent.

They, in their arrogant ignorance,

Could know nothing

 Of poisoned Bundt cake.

Author's Note

Thanks for reading

Reviews

[Zoya]

Woah, quite spine-chilling. Perfect word choice, length of the piece. Well written!

[Sami Khalil]

"Country music,

Flowers,

And homemade Bundt cake.

We, in our childlike innocence,

Could know nothing of their evil intent."

Another great country write or folklore. Wonderful...:).................

[Delmar Cooper]

Thanks for the comment Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..............................

[Lyn Anderson]

Aliens and poisoned Bundt cake? And you said "what next" of me?

[Delmar Cooper]

I considered running over them with a combine, but I wanted to include the ladies in the slaughter.

[Lyn Anderson]

I like the short version -- your brain is so delicious, and I like it when you leave a little to pick over.:)

[Delmar Cooper]

I forgot the other never saved it

[Molly]

This was defiantly very creative. It was short and to the point.