Yes it makes perfect sense to me. Intellect is all very good and nice but to love and experience that bliss effectively we must leave Intellect behind. If you want to really feel in love, you have to close your eyes to the faults of the one you wish to love. The rose lenses just have tocome on to hide all those ugly parts. You can't love with harsh bright lights on or wyour minds eyelids open. So I find a lot of wisdom in this poetry. Someone who writes like this obviously knows a lot about relationships and that is to be applauded and learnt from. Thank you.
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Thanks for reading. I don't think you ever get a final degree on affection.
heh, from another angle, "if you don't laugh, you'll cry"... bunch of stuff under the sheets here. But then ignoring them could lead to bliss. Who knows, coulda happened.
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Thanks for reading, you have to write some poetry here (the Café) or they kick you out. I am a sto.. read moreThanks for reading, you have to write some poetry here (the Café) or they kick you out. I am a story reader and writer.
A piece of amusing philosophy here, and nicely rhymed. The last verse sums it up succinctly. A mind is fine/but bliss can't miss.
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Your summation is excellent. Amazed at the paraphrase.
Thanks for reading and your gracious.. read moreYour summation is excellent. Amazed at the paraphrase.
Thanks for reading and your gracious comment.
I like this. I often find that the most loving people hardly ever have minds as big as their hearts. Intelligence can cut you off from your heart, I guess! Hope this comment agrees with the theme of your poem...
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Thanks for reading and your gracious comment. The theme is what the reader takes it to be. Once wr.. read moreThanks for reading and your gracious comment. The theme is what the reader takes it to be. Once written a poem or story just floats away,another message in a bottle
My daddy used to say of marriage, " that being obedient is just OK....but being submissive will get you love every time". what a beautiful dance.....dana
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Hello Dana,
I hope you have a wonder filled new year.
See all, hear all, say nowt!
yes it made me smile.
'' nowt '' is UK speak for - ''nothing''
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3 Years Ago
Glad it garnered that smile. When you have an idle moment please see my poem "My Old Da Said" your .. read moreGlad it garnered that smile. When you have an idle moment please see my poem "My Old Da Said" your opinion, as an expert in such matters (accents not incest) would be interesting.
It reads very smoothly, great easy rhymes. A clever sentiment as well. I can't help it overthink everything, perhaps that's why I can't even keep an imaginary girlfriend.