I hate you even more Mason

Dont ask

Last night,

You pushed me over the limit,

that was the last time,

Last night,

We didn't mean to offend you,

We were joking and having fun,

Last night,

You put us through hell,

Your touch was like fire,

Last night,

Im still crying because,

You cant open your eyes to see, 

Me and her could have died,

While you were watching us with your evil eye,

Laughing while you left us to suffer,

While it was the crack of dawn,

11:00 pm tonight,

I’ll sit and cry one last time,

Now that you got her again,

Your gonna play me one last time,

I’ll breathe my last breath,

Speak out my last word,

Out of my life you will be,

So just believe in me, 

I’ll trust in you too, 

But never ever again,

Not till the end.

Reviews

[Stanley Wilson]

great full of emotion

[MAC]

this is so raw, i love reality pieces that come from the heart twisted with anger. excellent write!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

There is a raw emotion spilling out of your words, depicting a very honest imagery of anger and hurt. Well done!

[stars are far]

This was a nice piece.
great work :)