Longing for Love

Tanka about a heart's longing.

The heart longs to have

A love to last forever

So pure and so deep

A lover like no other

To carry this heart of mine

 

Author's Note

My first real tanka...

Reviews

[Phoenix Alleena]

Aws,Dani D, this is really cute.
Tankas are nice if you just
want to write a tiny something
about anything. This one exudes
that "

[Wildfleour]

Nice work! We did Tanka's in class the other day. I'll put mine up, if you'd like.