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Wow, this is a type of poem I'm not familiar with, but it was very well done. It obviously came from a raw place, and the emotions are very clear. The formatting is interesting but you made it work to your advantage very nicely. It isn't the most obvious of pieces but, that isn't always necessary anyway. Again, nice job. :)
Interesting and cool. I've never written in Sonnet style before. I like the play on words; it makes it sink in all the more. "Today we walk away, from today" - my favorite line from this.
You address topics that many dare not walk through love and I admire that..a lot of heartfelt emotion in this piece..we need to explore all emotion, seems you do :) xx
Wow, this is a type of poem I'm not familiar with, but it was very well done. It obviously came from a raw place, and the emotions are very clear. The formatting is interesting but you made it work to your advantage very nicely. It isn't the most obvious of pieces but, that isn't always necessary anyway. Again, nice job. :)
Not sure what a shadow sonnet is, still I must say there is something musical in the way the words repeat and shuffle into new meanings. The ending lines were incredible. The whole read left me with an image of heavy guilt in my mind's eye, funny...
well actually i thought it was good very raw and full of unexplainable emotion. i actually had to read it twice to understand what i was reading though. job well done. [:
I am not a fan of sonnets, mostly because I am not a traditionalist, but I like this, I like the construction and the flow remains constant through out. Good read and write.
Hey, I'm here to share my writing and connect to other writers. I am hoping to experience other types of writing and to learn from it. At the moment I am beginning to learn how to write screenplays fo.. more..