"Me"

"Me"

 

"I'm the f*****g princess,

Get used too it.

F**k yeah, I'm better then them b*****s.

And don't f*****g look at me you, twit.

B***h, go do the dishes.

That's not my job.

My job is to be pretty.

I ain't no two-bit bitty.

I'm f*****g me,

Get the f**k used too it.

What is it that you can't see?

I'm f*****g ROYALTY!

You bloody retard.

B***h, this ain't hard.

Obey me,

Love me,

Respect me,

Obsess over me,

Want me.

Oh b***h,

NOW you understand?

I'm the crazy f****n' b***h running the game.

Remember my f*****g name."

 

Reviews

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

This poem really had a good flow to it... i felt like it had a great rhythm to it made me bop my head to it hahaha.... I like how you demand your prescence in the site like Mistress Erica said... And like what Mistress Erica said, I don't treat anyone like royalty... well okay if my vampire prince came i would but yeah lol.... I like this piece... good job!

[Enigmatic Amor]

Nice passion. One track mind for this girl, over indulged in self. Different, I like it.

[Juanita]

First, the flow was nice. The rest was okay, but if you wanted to write a poem about conceit, you could have done it without using so much foal language. You used the word f**k, or some form of it about 8 times and you used b***h about 5 times. I'm not trying to be mean, but if you're serious about writing, you're going to have to be more creative in your choice of words. Again, the flow was good, which shows you have great rhythm & the ability to write poetry, but maybe you can apply that skill to something with a little more depth in it. I'm not saying you shouldn't sware in your poetry, but all the swaring combined with the insults, is a bit much.

[;]

Love the flow of the whole poem....The only thing I'll disapoint you in is that I don't treat anyone like royalty...Other than that your poem was cool. I liked how you demanded the prescence of the room or in this case the site/page! you got something in ya just i'd like to see more.

[kurrupted]

(RAP)

Ladies and gentlemen,
N****s and b*****s,
W****s and snitches,
open your eyes,
analyse,realise,
open your eyes,
Y'all better better reconize,
that delicateadelle is imposing her presence,
explicitly cuz there aint no repentence,
f**k the sentence,
writerscafe as she senerades,
delicate,
is you as she regulates,
prostrate,
and remeber the f*****g name as you suplicate

I SEE THIS MORE LIKE A VERSE FROM A "WHAT'S MY NAME?" HIHOP TRACK, WELL WRITTEN ,I LOVE THE FLOW TOO.

[Life Inside Death]

youre amazingly f*****g special
youre so special i dont even feel like im worthy of reviewing your work
and im just curious...is that little pic up there by the poem from The Used album? it looks like it..

[.:DelicateAdelle:.]

:) Aren't I f*****g special?