The Capture

Al walked up to the edge of the boarding house looking up at the window completely blocking off his mind before waiting until Peter and Christina were both asleep before putting a spell on Peter to make his sleep deeper and so he would think Christina was still in his arms even if she wasn't. 

He jumped up and into Peter's bedroom window gracefully and quietly before sticking his fingers under the window crack before opening it quietly stepping through, his eyes adjusting to the darkened room before pulling out a needle from his coat pocket walking over to the bed crouching down before lightly lifting up on of her arms exposing her vains before slowly sticking the needle into her arm pushing the drugs into her blood stream taking the needle out putting it into his coat pocket standing up right looking down at her thinking to himself what a pity. 

Al moved her out of Peter's arms grinning to himself that his spell had worked and he didn't wake up before throwing her over his shoulder and walking back towards the window and leaving out it jumping landing gracefully on his feet before fixing her over his shoulder before walking out of the backyard towards the woods now moving in a graceful blur. 

He headed toward his hide out before opening the door ducking his head as she entered closing the door behind him nodding the human who was in the main hall before looking into her eyes saying in a calm voice before she repeated, "you aren't going to let anyone else in unless I give you then okay." He walked down the hall opening the third door on the left before walking down the stairs closing the door behind flipping on the light switch heading over to the wall before setting her down grabbing down chains that were apart of the wall with cuffs before cuffing her wrist the chains making her standing, then cuffing her ankles. He walked over to the table that was across the room before flicking off the light because he honestly didn't need it.

Al turned back over leaning against the cold stone wall looking over back at Christina seeing her eyes moving behind against her lids. He shook his head seeing she was still knocked out before giving a small shrug of his shoulder walking out of the room closing and locking it behind him. He headed to the stairs before walking up them, going to the main room in the house sitting back in the house and looked over at the door way to the living room a grin growing across his lips as the head of the house hold made their way into the room before motioning her over to him. 

She sat down on the couch next to him looking at him in a daze. His fangs popping out of his gums as he looked down at her bruised neck lowing his head toward it before sinking his teeth into her neck filling his mouth full of her warm blood.

In the mean time as Al was feeding on the defenseless woman.

Christina's head stirred a bit before her eyes slowly blinked open the room to dark for her to see anything, she tried scanning the room for something out of the darkness, she sighed deeply when she found nothing her chest shuttering as her breath exhaled with her sigh. She leaned her head back against the stone wall before calling, "Hello!!" She furrowed her brow when she heard her echo closing her eyes trying to calm herself enough to think something to Peter but she was cut short when she felt a cold hand on her face, "tisk tisk Christina we wouldn't want you doing that just yet." Al said ripping her locket off her neck throwing it off to the side. She listened to his foot steps against the floor as they moved away from her, squinting her eyes when the lights turned on, blinking a couple times till she was used to the light glaring seeing it was Al. "What in the hell are you doing?" She hissed at him. Al chuckled darkly shaking his head, "you should show respect to me after the gifts I'm going to give you." Christina rolled her eyes, "a gift? That's rich.." Al laughed and walked over her in a blur, which made her flinch, "lighten up, your in for a treat, your gonna get a history lesson see a movie, relocate and resent time." Christina eyed him like is he serious. 

Al leaned back against the wall near the door with a nod, "I'm completely serious in every sense of the matter Christina, so to start off your lesson...it will be on self history." He nodded again, "the darker side of you, the side I am going to show you and you will learn to know like that back of your hand." He looked over at Christina waiting to see if she was going to comment before continuing, he walked back over to her in a blur putting the palms of his hands on her temples making her eyes go completely white, seeing all the differen murders he and Carol had done making Christina shutter like a leaf and when moved his palms before her temples her eyes washed back over to their golden brown her head floping down muttering quietly, "please...let me go." Al shook his head at her making her hold her head back up straight, "I'm only beginning...suck it up." He said swiping his hand over her eyes making her watch on repeat how the ritual for drinking from another vampire was done, from someone else's point of view Carol doing it, Christina let out a small scream trying to close her eyes to make the images stop but it did her no good. Al walked to the door leaving her to continue watching the ill mannered scene closing and locking it behind him snickering hearing her plead for him to stop, walking up the stairs pulling out his pocket watching checking the time seeing it was about to be sun rise grinning to himself muttering under his breath, "may the games begin."

Reviews

[Shattered Dreams]

This is *very* interesting! The title screamed to me to read it, because my name is actually Christina. And this is weird too, my step-brother's name is Al! But yes. Onto the review. The story itself is very intriguing, I can sort of feel the plot building up. One of the things that bothers me right now is that 'Before' is one of the only connectives you've used, and it makes the passage a bit boring to read, which is a shame because this is such a good story. If you could go back to the second paragraph and read it as if you were the reader, maybe you'll see what I'm getting at and you might find some better connectives. Other then that, this is really good! I'd also say to go over it once more to just check you've got enough comers in places after words like 'But' and other connectives. Keep going, though, this is good! And please don't let what I said discouraging you; you are you, and we all need a little guidance at times. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Oh, and before I forget, Merry Christmas! If you celebrate it!

[Daydreamer54]

i recommend seperating your dialogue so it'd be easier to read.
"Like this."

resent time." -reset time.
Other than that, it seems interesting. ^^