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 I just want to disappear
Stop the time, stop the clocks
And travel the world for a year.
Because I know that all the unsaid words
Are the ones that are sincere.

You've seen it in my eyes before,
I just can't stay here for so long.
So after we share our last cup of coffe,
I'll be gone.

So pack all my books, all my pictures.
And please, don't be afraid
When the night comes back around
To bring that same old loneliness.

I just want you to know
That we've come too far to let this die.
Just like when we spoke in silence at night,
I know you never thought we'd have to say goodbye.

Author's Note

First thing I ever post somewhere, so I'm kinda nervous. Sorry if you find any grammar problem, english isn't my mother language.
Let me know your opinion.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is very good. You wrote of dreams and great yearning.
"I just want you to know
That we've come too far to let this die.
Just like when we spoke in silence at night,
I know you never thought we'd have to say goodbye"
The above lines stood out to me. No goodbye is easy. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[rach]

Unsaid words can be so powerful, and can speak louder than anything else,
and leaving can be so hard, even if its what you want more than anything.
I enjoyed reading your poem, its scary posting something for the first time and leaving it to be critiqued,
Good work, I enjoyed it!