Patterns of death

a life story

the first one died when she was five

she hung herself in the trees outside

her brother dies when she is eight

hit by a drunk while out too late

she loses her aunt at eleven

Huntington's sends her up to heaven

grandma goes when she turns twelve

and she begins to hate herself

this all started when she was five

but she still a child hiding inside

Reviews

[Jazique]

So sad but very good and simple. Well done.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

sad but a good write ... thank you for sharing ... debileah