Dancing on Air

Dancing on Air

A Poem by Absentee Reality Check

feet lift

breaking gravity

flying through the air like a wingless bird

painted mask

beautiful impact, dancing stag

now come the waves of applause

grounded

© 2010 Absentee Reality Check


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Lovely. I liked the bit of imagery in here and the short scene that you could portray from just these few words. Great job :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Bravisimo...

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow, I felt like you made this effortlessly, it was just in those little words, I felt like so much had come from it. It was amazing. Loved it all the way. 100%

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is lovely! Will be perfectly executed when
tweaking the third line's syllable count (10) when
I believe it should be 8. I enjoyed reading this for I
love dancing and the ballet. Kudos

Posted 14 Years Ago



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