Words nevr spoken

A Story by Absentee Reality Check

a ten word story about a man whose lover dies before he can propose.

The ring gathers dust while its owner visits her grave.

© 2009 Absentee Reality Check

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ebur™

although it was just a sentence, it was deep. people could have imagined more stories with this if you had not displayed the description at the top, but with it, you could definitely envision it more. great job. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago

.Bunnie.

Umm...I think this IDEA could be turned into a story, but...as it is, I don't see the point in it? If you hadn't explained what the sentence was about, I don't think anyone could have really understood it. I would maybe throw some more into this. You could make it into a short story, or maybe even a book.

Was this done for another contest, since it's only 10 words short? Just wondering! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago

MadasonBlue

Wow. This is incredibly sad. I don't think I'll cry, but I wasn't sure for a moment.
Vivid emotion in a short time: wonderful job.

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on April 25, 2009

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MyMottos- how i live my life " The Bible Contains six admonismanet to homosexuals and three hundred and sixty-two admonisments to heterosexuals.That dosen't mean God dosen't love heterosexuals, he ju.. more..