Two lines of agony

for a contest

We made love in the recesses of my mind

Until I opened my eyes alone in an empty bed.

 

Reviews

[Domo]

What a tragic two lines.
~D♥m♥~

[Fran Marie]

A powerful piece which speaks volumes in so few words~

THanks for sharing in the Stupid CUpid Contest~Fran Marie

[nostal]

Wow. Congratulations.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations on winning the two-line contest.

Sal

[Daleth Grey]

wow, i have to say you really made the best of your two lines! the first line is the setup, passionate and straightforward, then the second line really hits you all the harder. i actually gave an audible "wow..." when i read this one...you would win my contest hun :) and good luck with the one you actually entered!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Dreams can be deceiving. Good write!

[Angel Baby]

Been there - done that....it is indeed agony. Nice write, thanks for joining the contest. P.W.