Pain is Universal

Pain is Universal

A Poem by Dejene

Pain is Pain; both physical, and emotional.. Emotional pain quickly becomes physical when the pain poisons your heart.

In every country, people of all different backgrounds and beliefs experience pain.
It is the one thing that connects us all.. It is a place where we all lie together at one point or another.
And in pain even the most unforgiving souls are taught with no instructor how to empathize.
 We feel the pain of those who we know as well as those we have never met and in some cases may never meet because of the unfortunate circumstances.
Pain seems to be the name of my shadow; fore it follows me like a puppy to its owner.
 but don't get me wrong, I have happiness, see you must realize that one does not see their shadow all the time, only those moments when the the sun is out and you just happened to be standing in the wrong direction
and there my nightmares stare me in my face. They feed on me not because they know my weakness, but because they are my weakness.. however they are also the creators of my biggest strengths and for that i know that such burdens come from my Lord because of the blessing that my pain has been and though it hurts and i constantly wish it away I know and I thank God; fore my pain has made me who I am today.

© 2013 Dejene


Author's Note

Dejene
excuse my terrible grammar

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Not seeing a lot of terrible grammar actually. A few misplaced commas etc., but really it is very coherent prose piece, with good flow and smart thinking. Certainly there are other experiences we humans share, but one so base, so visceral as pain is a powerful connection. Nicely done

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dejene

11 Years Ago

Thank you!



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Not seeing a lot of terrible grammar actually. A few misplaced commas etc., but really it is very coherent prose piece, with good flow and smart thinking. Certainly there are other experiences we humans share, but one so base, so visceral as pain is a powerful connection. Nicely done

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dejene

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
Thank you for sharing your perspectives...:).................

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dejene

11 Years Ago

No problem, thanks for commenting
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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