To My Dear Ones With Love (Letter)

To My Dear Ones With Love (Letter)

A Poem by Almost Alive
"

I know, I know I have to; you don't have to keep on trying

"

    ...wake up...
        ...wake up...

Yes, I've been doing it so far
Everything is right on my mind
After so many times you've said so
I'm tired of listening to echoes

Tired of having to go to such places
Where I can't feel the floor, can't see faces
And after all this time I've been so strong
This is time where it all goes wrong

Please, don't raise your voice anymore
Your words like drills get through my head
Please, don't raise your hands anymore
Because my life you have damaged enough

I don't want to be with them no more... I don't want to stay here no more...
You can't yell at me anymore... If I'm not listening anymore!


So stop pushing the needles down
Your words on me are hurtful enough
Surrounded by those who won't understand
A single thought of this strangled mind!

I'm just so tired to have to take all this s**t!
It's my desire to just lay down and sleep
I don't give a f**k about what they'll all think
Shut up, shut up! Stop trying to decide for me!

It's hard when you feel so much loath
It's hard when everyone is dead
It's hard... It's hard for me to go on
When my life is so far away from me...

I never cry...
So don't cry no more...
I never cry...
So don't cry no more...
I never cry...
So don't cry no more...

© 2008 Almost Alive


Author's Note

Almost Alive
This writing isn't about me, but about a dear friend...

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I hope that friend is okay then.
But this is one good writing :)
I think this might be one of my favorites :P
Keep on writing


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Ian
You know I really liked this lyric, it's so good...

Great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Almost Alive
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I live inside my mind, El Salvador



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