I Can Still Hear The Idle Phone Tone

Wish she could just open her mind; and let me in for a while

So many things I have found
Now that you aren't here to listen to them
But the time is starting to kill
So of you I must ask but a thing

I know the music says that I am right
So please just think about our lives
Because it's cold outside your door
And I can't be knocking just forever

But I can remember that last line I spoke
Anything I said would not be enough
To keep you on the phone a second more
Everything you said proved me so wrong
And I guess your promises won
The second which you hanged up the phone

I'm asking you to come back here
And show me what you have found
Back there in someone else's arms
And not on the other side of the line

But the music proves me so wrong
And it tells me you're the only one
What to do when you're not mine?
The desire can turn me so blind

But I remember that last line you ignored
Anything I said would not be enough
To keep on the phone a second more
Everything you said proved me so wrong
And I guess your promises won
The second which you hanged up the phone

And they all say it's time that heals
Time runs fast as my life is (outside your door...)

But I remember that last line you spoke
Your silence was much more than enough
As I tried to keep you on the phone
Every word you said proved me so wrong
And I guess your promises won
Even if I keep on calling at your door

Just share some more of your silence
And stop thinking of what I might say
Start listening to my silent lips
Because the storm is raging outside
And I'm sure your phone rings all night

Author's Note

Not exactly new at writing ;) But this is my first writing here. I hope you people like it and review it, so I may improve and keep on posting my thoughts...

Reviews

[...MysteryGirl...]

So sweet and sad..
I like it.
And i get the meaning.
Thats people should open up to the people they care about.
Great Write :)

[Kristina]

You've done well at expressing your thoughts and feelings. I'm new at this as well, so keep writing what you feel. if you're hurting, write, it really helps and you come up with great poetry in the process. : ). Keep up the great work!!!