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A Poem by A.M. Nelson

smile like a lemon wedge
lightless, weighed
against the salt and sting

 

war of fruition
with kamikaze lean
to risk the lips, in kiss

 

and touch in bliss,
oblivion!

© 2008 A.M. Nelson


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Very little words, but such an interesting poem. I think it was rather cute to say the least. No real deep emotion here, but the idea of the poem is rather interesting.
-Twilight

Posted 16 Years Ago



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A.M. Nelson
A.M. Nelson

Perth, Australia



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