Falling Down

An old poem .

As I fell

I saw our pictures burning down

As I was waiting to hit the ground

I saw you waiving to say goodbye

I still dream of you

I still think of you

 

I scream , my heart burns

And it hurts

Every time I remember 

What has been told 

Remorse is eating me alive

 

I can not forget

That you took my smile 

I can not forget

That you've forsaken my heart

I can not forget 

That you left me alone 

To die 

 

I scream , my heart burns

And it hurts

Every time I remember 

What has been told 

Remorse is eating me alive

 

It's hard to watch you 

getting farther away 

Living your life to the fullest 

And I .... I am still mourning 

I am still silently falling down 

 

Reviews

[Persephone Blum]

Great poem! I especially love the last stanza of this poem. It ties everything together, and is exceptionally painful and real.

[Whiskurz]

Such a sad yet beautiful write....Bravo....Whisk