Choices

Choices

A Poem by Lilly Lyle
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a poem about right and wrong, weak and strong, and never giving up in between.

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There are so many people
so many faces
There are so many stories
so many faces
There is so much adrenaline
heartbeats racing
There are so many problems
each of us facing
There are so many legends
heros unnoticed
There are so many obstacles
we're losing our focus
There are so many roads
plenty to take
There are so many doubts
but never lose faith

© 2015 Lilly Lyle


Author's Note

Lilly Lyle
I would love to know if anyone can relate to this. When you are finished reading, I would love to know how it effected you at all. Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!

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When I read this I think always have faith and never regret the choices you make; to make them with conviction... I've made lots of choices and many mistakes but i regret none because I don't know if i would be in the same place had I not made them, and I like where I am, right now...

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is a great piece Lilly. I have and still believe in questioning everything no matter who strong my faith is and It is important to me to do so...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Written very well, Thanks for sharing. I can relate very well to this creative piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 19, 2015
Last Updated on June 19, 2015
Tags: life, faith, love, right, wrong, weak, strong, hopeless, streangth

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Lilly Lyle
Lilly Lyle

Virginia Beach, VA



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I'm a girl with alot of background. I don't say baggage because it sounds so negative. I've got alot of history, alot of thoughts, and a mind that just doesn't know how to stay in one place for long. .. more..

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