Green eyed monster

Green eyed monster

A Poem by D S Rollins
"

Jealousy.

"

Green eyed monster

 

Double--triple six

 

You will never catch me

 

I'm too quick.

© 2011 D S Rollins


Author's Note

D S Rollins
It is short... you think it depicts jealously in just 4 lines?

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I think the 666 breaks the flow. The other three lines work nicely but, I dunno, I think that would work better as another full image.

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Posted 13 Years Ago

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D S Rollins
D S Rollins

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