It's just you and me

My arch nemesis- the scales

Watching the red lever flicker

 

It's going past 100...

 

I'm not getting thicker?

 

 

 

It finally stops

 

But I know it's lying...

 

My jaw drops.

 

 

They told me I had to lose a few

 

But I like food!

 

Fine... I've got the clue.

 

 

I step on the a-cursed platform

 

Awaiting the read

 

 

I don't like what I see

 

But I like me.

Author's Note

Just a random idea. I'm playing around with rhyme too. So it might look forced.

Reviews

[GreenSkeleton16]

WOW thats so unique! what an awesome poem!

[Ashley Myers]

whether or not the rhyme is forced, i like it. i think its funny, yet at the same time your still letting people know that it doesnt matter what your size, you still like who you are. A lot of people have trouble accepting themself for being a few etra pounds overweight

[Moflo]

This was very good. I really like the concept and its written very nicely. Good job.

[shadowtigers]

I really enjoyed your poem. It's definitely a different idea I have never seen or read from anyone before, it is very refreshing. You are a great writer.