You stole my heart from cupid

The title speaks for itself, did this on my creative writing course.

You stole my heart from cupid

The presents you gave me always kept me grinning.

We danced until our feet became numb; this was only the beginning.

Our first night together comes to me in memories so lucid"

I knew you were the one.

On our first date; staring into each other's eyes,

the thumping muscles and the long goodbyes-

We used to always have fun.

 

Look at us now"you're never here and our room echoes with cries.

You're having an affair.

Our love-making is full of lust and lies.

You don't call, you don't kiss, you can't even look at me"this is a must

Your eyes are dead inside; do you even care?

This is the end of us.

Author's Note

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