My Battle

Tied in knots,

afraid of being stuck.

Lots of worries,

Of course it's my bad luck.

I search for the light,

but I don't see it 

I will find it though

When my candle of hope is lit.

I will run as fast as I can,

if that is what I have to do to win

I will fight and battle this,

And when I win, all you'll see is my grin

Author's Note

Helpful comments please :)

Reviews

[Missphit]

My sweet Angel, you write as a way to cope with your illness and it is the best therapy you could ever receive. I know what you are going through from experience and your words are as precious and beautiful as watching the morning glories unfold at sunrise or the sound of the dove calling for its mate. Write what inspires you, write what keeps your soul alive and your body fighting, for you have been given the gift of prose for a reason. Never give up the pen nor the fight, for you hold both in your hands. Much love and Bravo!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is inspiring, deep, emotional and in a funny way beautiful.
This poem is straight from your heart, and that makes it an even better poem.
This poem shows your a strong person and you are not going to give up no matter how hard things get, as I said that is very inspiring.
Not everybody is this strong or has this much positivity.
Amazing write, i love the way its written out, and the meaning to it.
I enjoyed this read :)

[y a s m e e n _ f u r m..]

This is a lovely poem :) It´s very well written, and explains a lot in such a short reading. I really like it!

[fwvalidus]

Very good poem that conveys emotion well.. I believe you could search for a different way of saying these few lines though that could enhance the poem further "but I don't see it
I will find it though"

[John Stussy]

Lovely poem. Stay strong and keep up the fight, I wish you a smooth recovery.

[Luke L]

Nice little ditty you have here, don't worry too much about rhyming or the format or a poem, just get your ideas out there and don't be afraid to break the format

[Everett DeValle]

Gosh, my eyes watered...it just reminded me of someone that when through the same thing...that's whats so good about poetry...I can walk into different worlds...I pray that you win your fight...I send you my prayers.

Your poem spoke of strength, and that's a positive thinking that all people should admire.