ANDROID

ANDROID

A Poem by Dee Oddbins
"

feeling feelings

"
Android stifles
mind demand,
eyes and ears are
carved in sand,
-
No remorse
and no reply,
program who
and where and why,
-
circuit short - 
the iron mask,
terminate - 
the final task,
-
start to think,
start to cry,
a microprobe
to rectify,
-
 A relay fault
A A A 
        re relay
                   fault
 A relay fault
A A A 
        re relay
                   fault
A A A 
        re  relay
                   fault
A A A
        re relay
                    fa--------------------------
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TERMINATION COMPLETE.
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© 2020 Dee Oddbins


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Wonderful. Clever. Unique. I tip my hat, well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dee Oddbins

4 Years Ago

thank you so much, Brian, I am glad you enjoyed this little experiment, thank you for reading
This poem about a dying android was different from other poetry in a good way. And I like reading stuff that is different.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dee Oddbins

4 Years Ago

thank you so much, Carina, I was trying to do something a little different, So I am very glad you en.. read more

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Dee Oddbins
Dee Oddbins

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