Do you remember

a Friday night

Livers fail/heads implode/

Disco dance/Depeche mode/

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flashing lights/drinking sweet/

falling over/vodka's neat/

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eyeing up/up and down/

no such luck/ rejected frown/

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throbbing bass/grinding hip/

peroxide spikes/sneering lip/

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bottled beer/buy the case/

ultimate pose/saving face/

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breaking glass/knuckles bruise/

just a laugh/blue suede shoes/

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moving on/bouncer's near/

can't forget/blood red tear

Reviews

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So this is like first version of Do you remember too ? I really like two lines stanza cause it give lot of freedom like for author but also for reader. You quiet capture essence of disco clubs. I always feel like i am at some kind of hallucination. Special when they release mist . Depeche mode is for me more evolving music group. After album songs of faith and devotion it's looks like they will soon fade away. But they came with ultra with very heavy beats and dark emotions. This album still haunting me. Even I listen to them very rarely it's most important band of my life. Great poem and great flow.

[Dee Oddbins]

thank you so much, this was a Friday, the second was a Saturday, there is fighting most weekends when the drink is flowing, yes nightclubs can seem a bit trippy, sometimes, thanks for you review I appreciate it

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This poem really reminds my youth where nothing was too serious and i can just lay down. It was quiet lovely reading cause it have easy flow to follow.