Song.

Song.

A Poem by DecentlyOkayWriter
"

the liar, the wistful, and you.

"
the world sings a song
sweet and long
only the sound seems true.
the few who hear it-
most fall off a turret
oh, why must one of the exceptions be you?
the song carries on
hopeful and strong
maddening and deceptive, rosy type hue . .
yet we all just march to noon
while singing this tune
the liar, the wistful, and you.

© 2024 DecentlyOkayWriter


Author's Note

DecentlyOkayWriter
Pardon the nonsense.

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It is good to ponder and be wistful but not to lie nor be lied to. Billy Joel sang "Honesty, it's hardly ever heard and mostly what I need from you." And I think for trust to grow honesty is a prerequisite. And every good relationship is founded on trust and respect. Another great read. I'm happy to have found your work.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


the world does sing. and only a few of us hear it. listening is a powerful act; and we feel liberated when we really do it. thank you for reminding me of that.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Nonsense is always welcome here. I don't even think this fully deserves to be called nonsense, not completely at least. It did have an element of silliness to it, but it also rang very true to reality. "the world sings a song/ sweet and long/ only the sounds seems true." That's just a really great collection of lines right there.

Posted 4 Months Ago



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