Eternal Bliss

  A thoughtful day of fearless mind

  Goes ahead of the darkest forest

  Stealing the faith with light

  He declares …

  Let the dark lit in faith, 

  Get the home filled with joy,

  My dearest eternal bliss !

Reviews

[DaVoid]

Beautiful.
I get the sense of a warm home here. Hope.

"Let the dark lit in faith" is a sentence that leaves me what confused.

Wonderful overall.

[manju menon]

good job.I think the theme is really nice and the words are apt..well done..I am also new to poetry..if you find time , please review my poems