To Touch The Heavens

I am so fascinated, amazed at the beauty my eyes behold,
As I look into the space where unknown pleasures unfold.

Or the back drop of such magnificence You still shine like a Star.
I can't help but be dazzled by the splendor of you, the person you are.

How I long to hold you, be mesmerized by your eyes, your smile.
Come sit with me, take it easy lets talk for a while.

Share with me the things that you feel inside.
In me you can trust, forever you can confide.

The vastness of your heart and mind still amazes me.
Never have I Witnessed The beauty of spirit that only I can see.

Come take my hand please just walk with me, touch my face.
We will move to touch the heavens here in this our special place.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Thinker1]

I thought this was a great poem! It was short, sweet, and right to the point. One thing I did notice when I was reading it, was that the sentences were kind of chopy, and you don't want that in a piece like this. For example, in some sentences you used and too much, and it brought me out of the greatness of this piece. Overall, though, the piece was magnificent, the rhyming was exellent, and the simplicity of it all amazed me. With a little editing, you could be a great poet! Congratulations!

[Lauren Marie]

I loved this poem! I could feel the emotion in it, and the want of the main character.
This was a great piece!
~Lauren