Intimate Moments

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Intimate moment (s)

Intimate moments spent all alone
Loves secrets shared on the phone
So many times that we have shared
As passions fire that always flared

Consuming us both in the extreme
To carry us away into loves Dream
We soar on wings like angels in flight
Entwined as one in loves pure light

Each touch like that of a butterfly's wing
Like the thunder of voices as angels sing
Growing in passion as well as in need
Then we joyfully explode as we succeed

Caught up in the waves of ecstasies tide
Tangled in so many feelings along the ride
We collapse together side by side our bodies spent
Exhausted by intimate moment (s) and what they meant

4/3/2009
By Debra Edwards

Reviews

[Ellen Hammond]

Intimate moments spent all alone
Loves secrets shared on the phone

Now some may call that phone sex. lol But, this poem is soooo much more than that. When a couple is separated by miles, they can still share such wonderful, intimate moments with each other, as it is the knowledge that we are loved and desired that can carry us to new heights.

Lovely, intimate, sexy write! I really enjoyed reading it.

hugs, Ellen

[Fran Marie]

Consuming us both in the extreme
To carry us away into loves Dream
We soar on wings like angels in flight
Entwined as one in loves pure light


A most beautiful piece wonderfully expressed in poetic verse

THanks for sharing~Fran Marie

[Ivan_allanbard]

Very nice poem for the best feeling! have you ever heard this thought: There are many kinds of joy, but they all lead to one- the joy to be loved? I guess you heard it before as you wrote such a poem?
Take care!

Ivan

[Valentine]

Wow Debby,,you sent me flying with some distant mamory with this lovely romantic write..This is sexy, exciting and very well written..I am going to book mark this as a favorite of mine..God bless and thousands of prayers...valentine