MOONLIGHT ROMANCE

Moonlight Romance

 

Moonlight dancing on the water,

As toes make circles in the sand,

 

My heart is beating faster at the

Touch of this one mans hand,

 

He makes me feel like I never

Felt at another’s weathered touch,

 

When we look into each other’s

Eyes it’s a look that says so much,

 

Hearts joined and singing of love,

While souls become one to take flight,

 

As long as we are together sharing

Romance and beauty in the moonlight,

 

The gentle but passionate kiss sends us,

Soaring on moon beams romantic escapade,

 

A place of wonder the mortal can’t conceive,

With longing and passion beautifully inlaid,

 

It locks us into a tapestry our souls did weave,

Surrounding us in a world of our own dreams,

 

To be released and awaken only at mornings

First touch of dawn’s brilliance or so it seems,

 

Has it been real or imagined I can’t really tell,

Was it but another sweet memory that won’t last?

 

Perhaps it will stay and find a new reality,

Or just a haunting dream from someone in my past,

 

2/4/2009

By Debra Edwards

 

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Hi Debby!
Such a lovely adventure of love in this tale of moonlight romance!
And, you have conveyed the passion of enjoyment of it to the reader in a most special way!
It is beautiful!!
Hugs, Sheila

[Valentine]

A sweet, sexy and dreamy write,,Liked it very much..I must say you age getting better and better at writing girl..Congratulations..love and God bless..Valentine

[Carole]

You didn't miss a beat here, girl capturing the essence of romance! My hat is off to you! :-)

Is there a reason for all of the commas? I am thinking maybe you want it to flow faster than average since they instate a slight pause. JW?

You write a lot of romance and you are good at it!