Rivers Of My Mind

Rivers Of My Mind

 

Memories dance softly through the rivers of my mind,

While I search for reasons, answers, I cannot ever find.

 

As remembering passions that nearly take my breath away,

Waiting for you as I dream of us twenty-four hours a day.

 

You whisper that you love me and my frozen heart will melt,

Knowing that the things we share most have never really felt.

 

Then we drift off to heaven inside each others loving arms,

On clouds of pleasures and passions powered by your charms.

 

Soothed gently by the waters moving flow in the rivers of my mind,

On those days when I cannot reach out when life has been unkind.

 

12-15-07

Reviews

[*** Hey Jude***]

What a beautiful expression of faith and love for that special one. I pray that you recieve all this love and more! Hugs ~ Jude

[Rain]

I loved this piece. It also made me realize something I hadn't thought of, and that's how often writers somehow connect love, or the feeling of love, with water. Whether it's a mountain stream, or a vast ocean, we like to draw them together, my self included. Beautifully written. Rain..

[AK]

Beautifully done!

[Valentine]

Debby..this is one of the best of yours I have read..depth, passion, pain..etc..they are all in there. Crawling into your mind to bring up memories of the time when life was the best..I think we all do that at times..God bless..Valentine

[Murphy]

This is beautifully written... no pun intended, but there is a real depth to this. I like the connection between your frozen heart melting and the rivers of your mind. reminds me of a photo of a partially frozen river that i recently shot and posted in my 'photos' section... this poem reminded me of that. i love that connection... the frozen heart melting into the rivers of the mind. very nicely written.

[JC Fox]

The imagery in this was just stunning and it is a lovely piece

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

So beautiful Debbie.. so well written.
You are right , many have not felt the love you so well described.
I love this poem..and you!


Chloe
xoxo

[T. L. O'Neal]

The memory is a funny thing in how it works, it can take us anywhere and invoke all types of feelings and memories. This is a good piece and brings up thoughts in all. It flowed well and was a pleasure to read. T

[Cheryl J. Turner]

I can really relate to this piece, I find myself feeling the same things all the time.
Wonderfully written.