FAll In Glory

I love Fall

 

 

 

 

 

                     Fall In Glory

 

Autumn is here with a fresh scent of hope

While I’ am  revived in the notion that

like leaves falling from the trees I to will

be renewed.

 Waiting for the new life cycle to begin

as winters cruel hand bares down on

the earth like pellets of hard cold rain.

With each leaf that falls in illuminating

colors, I scoop them up like gems for

each one’s beauty is more precious then

fine stones.

With each fallen facet of amber, mint ,

per ado and mauve I feel a sense of hope.

I breathe in the autumn air that fills my lungs

the rite of passage surrounds me .

As I inhale the fresh renewal of the seasons

My favorite of them all by far is fall.

 

                     BY: Debbie Kelly

    

 

 

 

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

I agree with you the best time of the year. followed by nice snuggly cuddly winter.

I felt as if I was strolling through a park as I read your words. You painted a lovely picture. You make it possible for one who doesn't feel the same apprciation, maybe learn to respect those of us who like the chill coming in the air.

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you so much Kim.... its wonderful as a writer to read that I took you for a walk and you felt the sights.... :) that was my intention..... it means alot that you like it . Thanks again for reading!!

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you everyone for your reviews they mean allot.... sorry I havent responded earlier... I have been away !! Thanks again !! Hope all is well

[poetic soul]

the colours you portrayed of fall was awesome! and the picture added to the glory!! i really liked the read.....

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you very much poetic.... Im so happy you enjoyed it :) Mean allot that you read!!

[JRB]

this was fall at its best, thanks for the write and i liked the read,
JAN/uisiom

[Debbie_Philly]

Hey JRB... thank you so much for reading me... means alot :)

[Una Xoto]

I love fall, the smells & visions, the fermentation of the spirit & heart. You described the season & your embrace of it quite well. Thank you...

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you so much Una.... Im glade that this piece captured that for you when you read it... thats how I feel about Fall... my favorite time of year... :)