Without Gravity

Without Gravity

Floating on air with no boundaries a ride just for you

the endless space, a stream of consciousness without restrictions.

Free Floating on that thin line between earth and space

no clicking of the clock no free forming chaos.

Fallen into endless nothingness, the line between life and death

holding on or letting go of it all.

Earth’s beauty is so vast, oh what the angels must see from their view

oh what we take for granted.

The roar of the ocean, the colors of fall, a cool summer breeze, first

fallen snow … the smell of spring eternal.

Gravity keeps our feet on the ground while our minds let go.

When death is near I hope it’s like floating through space, celestial

in its beauty, endless in its wonder like life itself.

No more pulling of the gravity with a final freeing of the mind and a

drifting towards hope.

Debbie Kelly 12/11/14

2:15 am

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

This is beautiful. It keeps us grounded until the end and then we need to fly:

Gravity keeps our feet on the ground while our minds let go.
When death is near I hope it’s like floating through space, celestial
in its beauty, endless in its wonder like life itself.

Gorgeous imagery.

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you so much... I really do hope its like that :) sorry Im just answering I have been having computer issues... I hope to come back and read you as well :)

[Justin]

that was really good : :) it tells a great story :)

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you Justin.... thank you so much for reading :)

[Justin]

your welcome debbie it was really good :)

[Chris]

You caught my eyes with the thoughts of this one... and kept me here for a fair bit.

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you so much Chris.... I have missed you guys... I was without a computer for a time :)

[Chris]

When sound is so vast that all we hear is silence...
When light is so full that all we see is everything there is...
When our mind is so very open,
and our thoughts so very free...
I know I'm nearing home.

me

[Debbie_Philly]

WOW WOW Chris.... I wished I had wrote that...lol That is how I felt as I wrote mine... Amazing !!!

[Chris]

I DID listen to you - ya know