Depression

Depression

A Poem by Debbie_Philly

Depression


Depressions creeping in like a fog looming over the Atlantic

Dense grey matter choking so thick there is no air

It’s in the distance but the fog horn blows, a warning


Rolling in like a freight train with no way of stopping it

There will be no way to see through it only to wave

Your hands frantically in front of you for some direction


Depression's creeping in like a fog over the Atlantic

It’s a like a car crash waiting to happen, all you can do

Is wait, buckle up hold on and deal with the aftermath.

 

Deborah Kelly (Debbie Philly) 7/14/14




© 2014 Debbie_Philly


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I would say this was totally an amazing observation on the characteristics of depression, I have been there and I know how it feels... Your choice of words, expressions and presentation all are perfect to create this excellent this excellent work... The ending part has been the standing part of this poem... You have metaphorically conveyed the true pain of a depressed heart... Well done frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

8 Years Ago

WOW thank you so much Dhiman... your words mean allot... :) and yes its crippling sometimes... and y.. read more
Debbie_Philly

8 Years Ago

oops typos sorry



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Last two lines SO TRUE! I never suffered any depression until a few years ago. Up until that time I thought "Oh, These people need to get over themselves". Once I experienced the loss of control over emotion(no matter what you try short of medication you can't dispel the madness of it) I understood. It scared me so much I was on my knees begging my heavenly father to release me from its grip. Thankfully several weeks later he did and now I watch like your poem says for the warnings. Since then I see the signs and surf the waves much better knowing I'm on the edge and it will pass as it does.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

10 Years Ago

WOW Michael.... so sorry you have to go through it as well... your so right... its such a feeling o.. read more
Loved the creative visualization on how you've characterized depression as an uncontrollable force. The only thing you can do when it happens is too cope with it. Great work Debbie. Loved the picture you picked out for this poem as well. A thought provoking read. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Bpoet for coming by to read and for your very thought review it means allot !! :)
You explain depression quite well. It is exactly like all those things and more. But after it's gone, when you're truly happy and hopeful, when you decide to say, "I will not go back to that foggy pier again"
That's when you know you are stronger than the hands that choke you.
Very well done, fluent and from the heart. ^^

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Bluefire... your so right about that... thank you for reading :) I will be over to.. read more
Bluefire

10 Years Ago

You're welcome! And thank you. ^^
When you know that fog is rolling in and can do nothing to stop it, that is a scary feeling. Very apt metaphor. Let's hope the grey goes away and you can enjoy this lovely mild summer we're having, Debbie!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Rita.... Half the reason te fog is rolling in is because I have been sick with a v.. read more
Oh Debbie, you have penned this so creatively..terrific first line too..it set the mood perfectly for what followed...love the fog metaphor too as depression does creeps up and before you know it you are in the thick of it..excellent description.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sue.... It means allot and yes that is how if happens huh ... xo
sometimes i wonder how we ever manage to survive it . . . persistent little all consuming cuss



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

10 Years Ago

LOL I agree Emily... seems like its a writers curse.... but the pen helps... Thank you so much !! xo
I liked the fog metaphor. Good poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

10 Years Ago

Hey you how are you ? Thank you very much... I appreciate the read... I'll be over to see you as wel.. read more
Perhaps when there are signs that depression is about to come about, our surroundings really start to opaque our vision to the world.... And leave us another whole mess to deal with.... Good symbolism portrayed....
When depression settles in, the normal tends to disappear away... And be replaced with sheer darkness... As you say the atmosphere was emptied of air, only fog left out to complete the scene....
and one acknowledges the responsibility of depending of himself to deal with the climax and all that follows... I'm not a fan of depression though :P, I like sadness more :P


Posted 10 Years Ago


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Debbie_Philly

10 Years Ago

So very true Manal.... I myself turn inward and write when I feel like this. and yes Sadness is a be.. read more
Daydreamer

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome,Debbie :)
you're pretty btw xx 😃
I know I have never experienced depression but I have to say I believe you gave a wonderfully creative view of what it must be like. People who get depressed really can't control it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

10 Years Ago

Thank you Cowboy.... I can thanks God that it doesnt last long.... but I do know some who get it pre.. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

You are welcome I am bald to see you are still around in the cafe.
Debbie_Philly

10 Years Ago

Thank you... yea Im still here.. just in and out... havent been feeling well.. but I will be around .. read more

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Debbie_Philly

PHILADELPHIA, PA



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Hello everyone, My name is Debbie , I have been writing for about 13 years now, I'm 51 years old and live in Philly. I used to have a show on Blog talk Radio called REVERSE with Michael Quigg every o.. more..

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