The Cursed

This is a piece that Michael G. Smith wrote inspired by and included pieces of my poem "Cursed" .Thank you Michael I am honored .

The Cursed

By Debby Philly and Michael G. Smith

My nights pitch as raven wings flighted

Over earth I watch moon full rising triumph

And see the wood nymphs dance in delight united

To the sense of summer’s solstice solace

 

And steam of heat further glows the darkness

Glimmers revealing my hunger beneath satin skins

A life force screams in silence through my veins in blueblood

As a river crimson flows deeper into wallow sins

 

Like molten flames they burn imprint unquenchable

Thirst desires frenzy

Wilder like the twilight becoming insatiable

Until the feasting ends; soothes deviltry

 

And yet the nights endless continue feeding on me

Upon the weaker souls I vex

The damned I am forever searching

Blurs the endless blackness into nexus

 

The curses binds me; a vortex of melo tragic

Undead influx intimate in my existing

Within this stone flesh cold heart, stagnate

But, I forever long to look upon the morning sun…

yet merely finding myself within another hollow evening

Author's Note

This is a piece that Michael G. Smith wrote inspired by and included pieces of my poem "Cursed" .Thank you Michael I am honored .

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

Very dark but far from dreary. I found your language to be quite striking:

And steam of heat further glows the darkness
Glimmers revealing my hunger beneath satin skins
A life force screams in silence through my veins in blueblood
As a river crimson flows deeper into wallow sins

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you ice:) most of those words are Michaels..... he took my original poem Cursed and added hos spin on it :)

[TL Boehm]

a beautiful blend of two masters of the pen. Well done.

[Debbie_Philly]

Awwww Thank you so so much !!! :)

[WindSong]

An amazing poem written with skill and artistry! It's very well presented with its descriptive language, rhyme and imagery! Great writing!

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you so much Windsong.... I have to start reading again... Its been a crazy summer... thanks you again !! :)

[Sourav]

What a nice intense poem. Lovely use of words and the construction of the lines. Very profound write.

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you Sourav very much..... you could check out Michael G. Smith page as well... hes the one who collabed on this piece :)

[maria ( rose)]

WOW Deb ..You did a remarkable job on this writing the imagery and everything is explicit! Thanks for the share..check your inbx when you get time I sent you my number..ok Doll, hope all is good and I'll talk to you soon ..maria

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you Maria but I really have to give my friend Michael G. Smith the credit for this one... he took my poem Cursed and put his own spin on it using bits and pieces from my piece :) You should go give him a visit hes a really nice guy and talented I haven't been on FB... but I will talk to you soon... been going through some things.... hope all is well with you !!

[Debbie_Philly]

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/seasonofverse/1344649/

[maria ( rose)]

Hello!! it seems we keep missing each other on here..but yes, everything is ok TG sure hope things get better for you and I will check out the link thank you take care, love.

[Rita L. Sev]

Just read this on Michael's page - read it again here, and it's still an awesome collaboration! :)

[Debbie_Philly]

Thanks Rita.... I really have to give Michael all the props for this :)

[Adam Whitworth]

I wish you could keep the quality of writing but completely change the subject.

[Debbie_Philly]

Im not sure what you mean Adam ?

[A. Amos]

Micheal & Debbie, you made me speechless, I totally was lost in your words your verses...I always thought words can create a magically spell...today you made me believed that for sure...epic!

[Debbie_Philly]

Awww Thank you Amos..... Michael took my poem Cursed and added his words. Im happy you liked it !! :)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome and you both know, i'm fan of both of ypu:)

[Michael G. Smith]

Debbie this is an awesome poem!!! lol. Truly it is. I still love that line "Pitch as Raven". sets the whole tone.

[Debbie_Philly]

You made it awesome Michael I was honored you asked :)