Angel's Breath

I wrote this a very long time ago... when I thought of nothing but Rhyming....lol

                               ANGELS      BREATHE

 

 

                          Angels breathe so soft and sweet,

                          Runs down my spine and to my feet

                          For angels breath is always near, I walk

                          With footsteps charged without fear

 

 

                         Great armor cloaked on angel’s chest

                          I know that I now walk with the best

                          With wispy clouds and fancy flight the

                          Softest hands to guide my nights

 

 

                          Sweet dreams of sun and sparkle days

                          Come to my night time sleepy haze

                          I sit and dream with eyes wide shut

                          And leave my fears well in the dust

 

 

                        My angel’s breath is always there to

                        Warm my skin and stroke my hair

                        To let me know my days and nights

                        Should not be filled with fear and strife

 

 

                       Throw on the armor of sweet entity

                       And guide my hand to walk with thee,

                       For guiding my soul and sleepless nights

                           Will always be my angel’s fight

 

                      

                         Sweet angel’s breath I love so dear

                         May your guiding spirit be always near

                         And when the day comes for my last

                         Breath, please guide my soul to eternal rest.

 

 

                        Debbie Kelly ~

                          2005

                           

 

                          

                           

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

Debby this is a stunning poem. Lyrical and pure in spirit, gentle yet strongly penned. If we all could see angels around us....

[Debbie_Philly]

Oh wow TL what a wonderful comment... thank you so much !!! Much love !!!

[SAYED THANGAL]

true specification on angels, it is a thought provoking piece. all the best

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you very much Sayed... I will be over to read your work as well :)

[closed]

the best yet
And I'm sure you'll continue to enthrall with your verse

-Dream

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you Dream... really your words overwhelm !! :)

[closed]

no problem

[maria ( rose)]

May your guiding spirit be always near. Deb, this piece is absolutely beautiful. Well Done!

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you so much Maria.. its so old.when I rhymed allot... but somethings are ok in Rhyme I guess... Thank you again very much !! :)

[annabellee]

This is so wonderful. I really enjoyed reading it.
It flows without effort and conveys such a peaceful feeling.
Nicely done :)

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you so much Anna !!! Im so happy to see you and thanks for reading me.. I will be over to your spot soon !! :)

[annabellee]

you are most welcome :)

[...Relic...]

Nicely done. You've written an angelic poem that emanates with goodness.

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you very much Relic... this is so old... but Im really glad your came by and you liked it :)

[...Relic...]

Age matters not to a good poem, you're welcome.

[Debbie_Philly]

:) Thank you !

[Ladysue]

Debbie, this flowed effortlessly. What a beautiful poem! This should be on a card or something. It is truly lovely.

[Debbie_Philly]

WOW Sue thank you very much.... lovely thing to say.. thanks again for reading !! :)

[Jack...]

It sure is nice to safe my friend. Beautifully written and brough to us. Loved it Debbie.

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you so much Jack :) It's always great to see you !! :)

[Emily B]

it is good to see you here :) enjoyed the angelic image

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you so much Emily... its good to be back... I will be over to see you as well !! :)