Night Winds ( Senryu )

Night Winds

My eyes are heavy

The slumbering winds call me

Cozy is my bed

Deborah Kelly ( Debbie Philly)

Reviews

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:) May you have many light and airy dreams. Simply beautiful

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you so much Lynn !! :)

[Bluefire]

It's pretty, it makes me think of soneone out on a warm nighr and they decide to take a nap out in the peaceful field.
Nicely done. ^^

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you so much Bluefire :)

[Bluefire]

No problem. ^^

[Thomas Skahill]

I really enjoy your pictorial accompaniments

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you Thomas...some sights don't allow it.. but sometimes I find them to go with the words and sometimes they inspire the words :)

[Thomas Skahill]

it's working!

[Debbie_Philly]

I meant sites.... and thank you

[ANM]

We all have a special place.. special words!

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you so much ANM !!! :)

[ANM]

You are very welcome!

[Frieda P]

Slumbering winds, what an exquisite thought....now if only they'd blow this way! A sweet one Debbie. ;-)

[Debbie_Philly]

LOL I hear ya Frieda most nights its only a thought for me as well...lol Thank you !!

[SAYED THANGAL]

the beauty of the night well narrated, many interpretations possible for the poem, well done
sayed, India

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you very much Sayed !! :) Nice to meet you !

[Ladysue]

soft sounds of wind whispering to you at the end of day..lulling you to slumber..content and cozy in bed..beautifully done..

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you very much Sue... Happy to see you !! :)

[Ladysue]

my pleasure Debbie.. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Windy beds can be cozy. Really?

[Debbie_Philly]

No... the slumber wind is calling me to my cozy bed... not a windy bed...lo, Thanks for reading :)

[closed]

you spellbind all too easily

prodigious


-Dream

[Debbie_Philly]

WOw thank you Dream.... what a nice thing to say !! :)

[closed]

of course. i really am having fun reading your works. would you suggest anything in particular for me to check out?

[Debbie_Philly]

Hmmmm not sure.. I could send a few your way... will you send me some as well :)

[closed]

okay, it's a deal then^

[Debbie_Philly]

Ok Send away :)

[A. Amos]

Suxh a peaceful insight of cozy bed, brilliant my friend

[Debbie_Philly]

Thank you so much Amos !!! :)