Loss

I never got to meet you

But I'll miss you until I die

I pretend to see your face

When I look into the sky

I know that's where you are

And I know you're better off there

But little angel remember

Me and your dad remember, me and your dad care

No one else understands our pain

In part because the few we told would mock

Until a loss like this hits

Simple minded fools couldn't understand the shock

But Lucy, know that you will be loved

And one day we will finally hold you

Until then I'll remember, and cry

But know our love for you stays true

Author's Note

honest and open opinions are always welcomed

Reviews

[Alice]

I personally love this poem, as it sound very creative. The lines sound as if they come deep from the heart. This is very powerful, and made me feel sad as I read it, but understand the loss. You seem to have lots of potential! But there is always room for improvement, for everybody.

[Nature]

Very nicely written. You are vert talented I must say.best lines were - But little angel remember
Me and your dad remember, me and your dad care. Touching lines as well.

[Death's Poet]

Thank you. This poem was ripped directly from my soul and splashed to the page. It brings solace that others find beauty in it as well. Thanks so much my friend

[Hannah Grace]

This is sad, but very good. I believe writers most important jobs is to get to a readers emotions. And you, my friend, did this. Thanks for sharing!
~Hannah Grace

[Death's Poet]

Thank you Hannah, this one was a difficult poem to write, but the best ones usually are. I'm glad it conveyed well

[Hannah Grace]

No problem. It was an honor:D