All I Can See

All I Can See

A Poem by Death's Poet

Thank you for breaking what you fixed once again
How could I be so dumb to believe you a friend

You told lies of how you would never hurt me
But right now hurt is all I can see

© 2015 Death's Poet


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I can feel the pain in these words. Sometimes the people we care about most in life are the ones that can hurt us the most be it intentional or not. Sounds like the disappointment in this friend is hurting you but you have a friend here :) Good write I enjoyed your words :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Death's Poet

9 Years Ago

Thanks alot Aaron for your encouraging words :)



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I can feel the pain in these words. Sometimes the people we care about most in life are the ones that can hurt us the most be it intentional or not. Sounds like the disappointment in this friend is hurting you but you have a friend here :) Good write I enjoyed your words :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Death's Poet

9 Years Ago

Thanks alot Aaron for your encouraging words :)

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The Asylum I call my Mind



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