Death of you

You were the death of me

I will be the death of you

You'll feel my pain dear

If it's the last thing I do

When it's all taken from beneath

Don't you dare wonder who

Because liars get what they deserve

Honey that much is true.

Reviews

[Thesecuts]

Wow this is so amazing it gave me the chills. It's so short yet so long and perfect.

[Death's Poet]

Thank you oh so very much! This comment made my day

[Thesecuts]

Don't thank me, thank you because this poem made mine.

[AaronFreitas]

I am assuming that this liar is still the disappointing friend that hurt you... you definitely don't deserve that my friend. You have a beautiful mind and put down some beautiful words... keep it up and stay positive :)

[Death's Poet]

It is the same one, For a while they took away my inspiration but I decided not to let them take that away from me. Thanks as always :)

[AaronFreitas]

Never let anyone take away your inspiration... you have too beautiful of a mind :)

[Death's Poet]

thanks so much Aaron that made my day! :)

[AaronFreitas]

You are welcome my friend :) Nice new pic :)