Oh Honey

Oh honey please

Just one more chance

I promise a whole different song

A whole different dance!

Oh honey please

I swear things will change

I swear no more late work days

No more acting strange

Oh honey please

Don't push me out that door

It was just a mistake!

What are you so mad for?

-Her Reply-

Oh honey no

You don't get to stay

How dare you think

I'd let you treat me this way

Oh honey no

Pack up your crap

I'm done with these sleepless nights

And this heartbroken trap

Oh honey no

Go ahead honey walk

Because I know you won't change

You just won't kiss and talk

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

I love the two way conversation which you did so well like I was there in the background hearing so vividly this conversation or was this a play and I witnessed this on stage. Very nice indeed:)

[Death's Poet]

thank you so so much Andrew! So glad you enjoyed it :)

[Abilash Uttama]

i really like the way you presented this conversation with such a wonderful flow, it's amazing!

[K. Bridgid]

Wow this is beyond powerful. It honestly made my heart hurt. Love just really sucks sometimes and I feel so bad for this girl.

[FREE_BIRD]

is this a poem for someone special...

[Death's Poet]

no thankfully. This was just inspired by a friend of mine