Love is...

This was inspired by the fact that I was getting poked in the face by my boyfriend the entire time I wrote this. Kind of a satire lol

Love is patient

Love is kind

Even when you drive me to losing my mind

Love does not envy

Love does not boast

Even if I do make slightly better toast

Love does not dishonor others

Love is not self seeking

Even if you speak over me while I am speaking

Love is not easily angered

Love keeps no record of wrong

Even if you change the station during my favorite song

Love delights not in Evil

Love rejoices in truth

So sorry I lied that one time in our youth

Love always protects

Love always trusts

But not since that one time you left my sandwich with crust

Love always hopes

Love always perserveres

Well I still haven't quit after all these years

Love is these things

But sadly not me...

But I still love you more than waves in the sea

Reviews

[ANTO]

Shadow there are so many delighful little amulets of love here. Your fun side has shone here greatly - I loved the "sandwiches with crust" line - such a little nitpick but says a lot about this relationship. I was saddened by the penultimate line - it muddled me up after reading all the lines before and the playfulness of them. Overall I really, really liked this.

I found a wee typo
There are one too many 'r's in perseverance.

and I felt the final line could be improved;
"But I still love you more than waves in the sea" - I think the insertion of 'there are' would help this line -
"But I still love you more than there are waves in the sea"


:)))

[Death's Poet]

Thank you so very much! I will fix that asap! :) Thanks for such kind words

[ANTO]

Its my pleasure Shadow - Im glad I could help - Im honoured that you value my help. Thank you - have a great day ! :))

[FREE_BIRD]

hmmm...love is what every person takes it...for someone its in air, for someone in heart, its vast no one can explain what it exactally.