I don't care

I don't care

A Poem by Death's Poet

I don't care what you've done.
No, I won't judge each scar

Just please don't forget
How beautiful you are

I don't care what they say.
No sweet girl you aren't fat

You were made perfect
Whether curvy or flat

I don't care what you see.
Becuase girl you're a prize

Anyone who says anything else
Is just spewing lies.

I don't care what you hear.
You are not a wreck

All the others who say that
Need a reality check

I don't care what you've done.
No, I won't judge each scar

Just please don't forget
How beautiful you are

© 2015 Death's Poet


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well written poem. i like how most of the stanzas start with "i don't care" to solidify how beautiful the individual written to is. i like how there is a sense of acceptance and understanding in this poem. the way the poem is structured great because it makes it easy to read and it doesn't over complicate the meaning it carries. another thing i like about the structure is how it ends the way it begins, it is like a cycle. now i don't know whether you did that on purpose or not, but its great. i also like the rhyme scheme. it is simple and it doesn't mess with the content of the poem. well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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well written poem. i like how most of the stanzas start with "i don't care" to solidify how beautiful the individual written to is. i like how there is a sense of acceptance and understanding in this poem. the way the poem is structured great because it makes it easy to read and it doesn't over complicate the meaning it carries. another thing i like about the structure is how it ends the way it begins, it is like a cycle. now i don't know whether you did that on purpose or not, but its great. i also like the rhyme scheme. it is simple and it doesn't mess with the content of the poem. well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I absolutely positively agree...wish everyone had the same attitude of yours...sadly very few people own this mindset nowadays.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Death's Poet

9 Years Ago

I agree. It's sad how rare acceptance is this day and age
great one....truely believe what your poem says.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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