My love for you

My love for you

A Poem by Death's Poet

If your smile was the sun
I would stay outside all day

If my thoughts of you were sand
It would make the entire earth a bay

If my love for you was water
The whole earth would surely drown

If I am your princess
Your love for me's my crown

If your eyes were the moon
I'd sleep outside every night

If kisses were candles
I would flood the earth with light

If every I love you
Was the same as time

My love for you's a mountain
No one could ever climb

© 2015 Death's Poet


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Cute and adorable, liked it very much :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very beautiful! no one could ever dislike it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice and i think its very deep inside for lovers


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how warm this made me feel. Love is so powerful, especially when you are so deeply in love with one person. This is beautifully written and flows so well. I absolutely adore your writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Death's Poet

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very Much Bridgid!!! You just made my day as always! :)
Another great flowing write, beautiful sentiment and creative!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Death's Poet

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much James!

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