Stabbed

Stabbed

A Poem by Death

I feel it,
deep inside.
Burning like fire, 
with a siring pain. 
A sharp metal, 
inches inside my chest.
Yet its all imaginary,
in the realist aspect. 

I fall to the ground, 
and scream out loud.
The pain is breath taking,
unrealistic and insane. 
I want it all to go back to the old ways,
to a time where we used to know. 
A time where you weren't stabbing me,
deeper and deeper with every breath you take. 

I trusted you,
and you trust me. 
But nothing will ever be the same.
Now that your dagger is six inches in my chest. 
You'll regret it,
but I won't take you back. 
How could I,
when its sticking out of my chest.

I still love you with everything I have,
it's just that nothing will be the same, 
now that you've gone and screwed things up. 
It'll take a lot to get me back,
so good luck. 
Just be careful not to drag that dagger farther down,
and ruin me forever. 

© 2012 Death


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I really, really like this, now I'm curious as to who you are talking about, but very nice job! :) I would take the knife, and stab that person that much harder with their own knife, just for spite. Sorry, went off on a rant. Many people could connect with this in many different ways.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Wow amazing imagery. I love this piece. One of the best one that have have rad of your so far today. This is just amazing. You break trust and it take a long time to get it back. Awesome write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really, really like this, now I'm curious as to who you are talking about, but very nice job! :) I would take the knife, and stab that person that much harder with their own knife, just for spite. Sorry, went off on a rant. Many people could connect with this in many different ways.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow. great imagery of a broken trust and the lengths to repair it. break the trust again,and lose it forever. great piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Death

12 Years Ago

Thank you. :)

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